Sunday, 24 March 2013

View Far and Wide

  • Re-tell a camp experience in a diamante form.
  • We used an online site to help follow the form of a diamante poem.
  • Use the senses. 
  • Improve words with a thesaurus so we have no repeated words.
  • Understand that every word you use is precious so cut small words that do not help the poem.


  1. nice great poem alex!!!!
    nice diamante

  2. interesting poem,good use of pictures. I like the way you put a bubble on your picture and wrote the poem in here. It would of been a bit even better if you included more so I could image even more from the poem.

  3. nice poem Alex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I like the photo, Great photography.