Sunday, 24 March 2013

View Far and Wide

  • Re-tell a camp experience in a diamante form.
  • We used an online site to help follow the form of a diamante poem.
  • Use the senses. 
  • Improve words with a thesaurus so we have no repeated words.
  • Understand that every word you use is precious so cut small words that do not help the poem.

3 comments:

  1. nice great poem alex!!!!
    nice diamante

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  2. interesting poem,good use of pictures. I like the way you put a bubble on your picture and wrote the poem in here. It would of been a bit even better if you included more so I could image even more from the poem.

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  3. nice poem Alex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I like the photo, Great photography.

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